2014년 9월 29일 월요일

Week 7 Objectives: Narration


2. The narrationwhich summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.


  I will show some advantages of reading paper news by quoting Fin Galligan's opinion and I'll draw most compelling advantages of reading paper news and this will show why paper news is still loved by people. Then I'll also some examples that how paper news changes their ways to survive. These examples can be a good rebuttal of the suggestion: Internet news will totally take possession of the paper news domain. 

 My persuasive argument thesis is: Paper news won't disappear despite the Internet news has invaded the domain of paper news.

  1. What do people already know about my topic?
      - The rates of reading Internet news is increasing rapidly. 
      - Reading Internet news has many advantages like convenience, speed. 
      - Spread of mobile phone contributed to the reading rates of Internet news.

   2. What research has already been done about my topic?
     - The rates of getting information from the Internet news and paper news.

Narration

   As the Internet is developed and the usage of the Internet becomes various, it eventually came to ruler of our  society. It's not a exaggeration that almost people use Internet in order to get something like enjoyment through online games or convenience through Internet banking, online reservation systems. Furthermore, Internet entered the domain of information, which is taken charge of newspaper and actually the rates of getting information through Internet increase steadily. In a word, the existence of paper news is in danger. In fact, the major sources of income of paper news is advertisement. However, according to the Huffington Post, advertisers prefer to display their products or services on Internet news rather than paper news because people subscribe the Internet news more than it's counterpart- paper news. Furthermore, according to the Huffington Post's question investigation, people are tend to prefer to the Internet news because they can check on a lot of news even when they are moving(due to the spread of mobile phone) and actually the Internet news doesn't need to pay fee. 

2014년 9월 22일 월요일

Week 6 objectives: Introduction



1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument. 


 In 2008, according to the Pew Research Center for the People & the Press, the rates of getting information through the Internet news surpassed the rates of getting information through the paper news and this social phenomenon still continues. The dissemination of mobile phone and development of the Internet also contributes to subscribing Internet news compared to paper news. Many people think that paper news will disappear because the Internet news is evolving more rapidly and today people are accustomed to speed, usability. However, I want to ask some questions to people who predict the end of the paper news like: Have you ever thought about the advantages of paper news?. Paper news still play a important role in information delivery domain. Therefore, paper news won't disappear despite the Internet news has invaded the domain of paper news.




Reference: http://multimedia.journalism.berkeley.edu/tutorials/digital-transform/print-and-broadcast-news-vs-internet/

  

2014년 9월 15일 월요일

Week 5 objectives: Classical Argument Outline



 1. The introduction, which warms up the audience, establishes goodwill and rapport with the readers, and announces the general theme or thesis of the argument.

- I will start by mentioning the subscribing rates between the Internet news and paper news(the rates of subscribing Internet news has become prevailing rather than its counterpart-paper news). Then, I will cast a question as an attention grabber like- 'Do you read Internet news more frequently than paper news?'. Then I'll end my introduction with this resolution: The newspaper won't disappear despite of Internet news has invaded the domain of paper news.


2. The narrationwhich summarizes relevant background material, provides any information the audience needs to know about the environment and circumstances that produce the argument, and set up the stakes-what’s at risk in this question. In academic writing, this often takes the form of a literature review.

 - I will show some advantages of reading paper news by quoting Fin Galligan's opinion and I'll draw most compelling advantages of reading paper news and this will show why paper news is still loved by people. Then I'll also some examples that how paper news changes their ways to survive. These examples can be a good rebuttal of the suggestion: Internet news will totally take possession of the paper news domain.

 3. The confirmationwhich lays out in a logical order (usually strongest to weakest or most obvious to most subtle) the claims that support the thesis, providing evidence for each claim.

 - I will display three claims that will support my thesis...

  1. Editorial vigor 
   I'll change paper news's disadvantages to strengths. I'll suggest new paradigm of seeing paper news. For example, the space limits of paper news mean that the contents of paper news indicate that the contents are   rigidly selected. 

  2. Depth and breadth
   I'll show the top advantages of paper news: depth and breadth. I'll quote experts opinion and some question     investigation.

  3. The changes of paper news to survive. 
   I'll research some changes of paper news's form and what the transitions indicate about. 


 4. The refutation and concession, which looks at opposing viewpoints to the writer’s claims, anticipating objections from the audience, and allowing as much of the opposing viewpoints as possible without weakening the thesis.

  I will concede that the subscribing portion of Internet news is dominant rather than subscribing paper news.    However, I'll show the inherent competitiveness of paper news and its strength. 

 5. The summation, which provides a strong conclusion, amplifying the force of the argument,  and showing the readers that this solution is the best at meeting the circumstances.

 I will close with a summary of my previous points, emphasize why paper news won't disappear by Internet news's intrusion, and I will have a brief consideration of the paper news's continuance. 

2014년 9월 8일 월요일

Week 4 objectives: Articulation



 1) My argument
 - I want to argue that paper news won't disappear even though Internet news has invaded the domain of paper news. According to some researches, the rates or subscribing Internet news surpassed the paper news. However, I'd like to show that paper news still has a lot of advantages. 

 2) How I found my argument
 - While reading 'The Harvard Sampler', I thought that the Internet has affected our society in many ways, domains, and it replaces many analog things like paper news. However, I wondered paper news would perish because of the Internet's invasion and my final answer was 'NO'. So I started to find some sources that support my arguments and finally found it(Fin Galligan's essay: Why the printed paper is still king of the news.) 

3) New research questions
  
   1. What are the differences between paper news and Internet news in contents?
   2. How paper news survives if Internet news does not remove paper news?
   3. Should paper news change their some traits inevitably?

 4) Connections to the Harvard Sampler
   - Chapter 2 in 'The Harvard Sampler' talks about the Internet. In preface, a author(Harry R. Lewis) suggested the inexhaustible availability of the Internet. So I focused the intrusion of Internet in many domains especially 'news'. However, paper news won't disappear and I sets aside some evidence that support my thought.
  

2014년 9월 1일 월요일

Weak 3 objectives: Research task


 Source
 -Fin Galligan: Why the printed paper is still king of the news
  http://www.swets.com/blog/why-the-printed-paper-is-still-king-of-the-news#.VEJLRSKsUbg

 My topic
 -Paper news won't be disappeared despite of Internet news invades the domain of paper news.

 What I hope to learn from this source
 - I want to seek for some facts that paper news is still competitive and ensure my opinion by quoting expert's thinking. Also, this web- page has various implications about the advantages of paper news so I can make good signposts.

 Notes
 - The advantages of newspaper: Editorial vigour, Robust content, Intuitive layouts, Universal appeal, Tenacity of information, Depth and breadth. (and detailed explanations.)

 Final thoughts
 - The examples on this source would be a nice evidence of the topic: Paper news won't be disappeared despite of Internet news invades the domain of paper news. Newspaper won't disappear because of its intrinsic characteristics.




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